Technical Report Proposal Peer Review for Nicholas, Rebecca, Jolene (Proposed Solution)

      
The solutions have been well delivered. The technology mentioned helps to reduce carbon emission. There is a flow in the proposed solution.  The group went on to mention what the technology is and further explains the specification sizes of the blades that could fix into various tailpipe’s size. Following on, the group explains how the blades are able to reduce carbon emission in three possible ways.

 The group’s proposed solution has been identified with the aid of surveys that they have conducted and looking through sources of what measures have already been attempted in regards to reduce the carbon emission. Whereby car owners have to get their car inspected regularly by VICOM ltd to check on the level of emission of the particular petrol driven vehicle. They further mention that there are lapse in the inspection and there is no proper solution that could minimize carbon emission at this moment. However, when to mention ‘gap’ in the inspection. Is that gap the root to the problem of not able to reduce carbon emission in cars?The report explains the 3 ways of how it reduces emission. However, in the section ‘Reduction of particulate materials emissions’ under how it works, do include clearer explanation of how it reduces the carbon emission. Although there are illustrations of the technical aspect behind it, it may still seem vague. For people whom have little or zero specific background may find it harder to comprehend.In point 2 of how it works I believe that the diagram could be enhanced by labeling the crucial components.  

Overall, the content is valid and sufficient to prove of how it will able to reduce the carbon emission. Great attempt, however points to take note.
I find that language used and the style written was rather a little informal as they used point form, making the report a little inconsistent with its formatting. In addition, making it seemed as though the paragraph is long because of the indent that is created.